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Then, the teachers organised the children for morning tea. The children ate cookies and had a drink.
The children came back and then repeated some dances.
At the end of the festival the children were exhausted. They were tired. But they were excited and they enjoyed the event.
2 comments:
Kia ora, Fraser
I really enjoyed reading your story. You described the event very clearly using interesting words. No wonder all the children were exhausted after all that dancing.
Hi Fraser,
What a great story! You used lots of descriptions in your writing, and you were very thorough. Well done,
Karl's mum
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