The children hopped on the bus to go to the folk dancing festival. The people all came to the ASB Stadium. There were lots of people from different schools. They danced in the stadium. At the festival the children performed a lot of dances. Some of the children’s favourite dances were Brown Girl go in the Ring, Seven Jumps and Follow the leader.
Hemi
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Hi Hemi,
I like the way your used short sentences in yoru story writing - that helped to convey the fastness of the festival. Which was your favourite dance? I like Brown Girl in the Ring.
Karl's mum
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