Thursday, November 24, 2011


Old Mcdonald’s Farm

Last week Old Mcdonald’s Farm came to visit us.
First, Farmer Crystal was waiting for Room One
at the gate. The farmers’ names were Crystal,
James and Jamie.
Next Crystal let us feed the baby lamb.
After that we went in the pen and patted the
animals. When I went in the pen I was scared of
the goat. Then I brushed the pony.
Later on Crystal gave us some dry grass and hay.
Afterwards I held the animals.
At last I felt happy when I was holding the

1 comment:

Plessius family said...

Kia ora Fineasi,
I enjoyed reading your story, and the way you have used different starters for your sentences.
What was your favourite farm animal?
Tsana (Robin & Karl's mum)