In the morning Peter was playing with his animal friends in the meadow. The cat wanted to eat the bird.
The wolf came out from the tree and chased the duck. No matter how fast the duck ran the wolf ran faster. The wolf caught the duck and ate her alive.
The hunters came out from the meadow and they came with their guns. Peter said to the hunters, ’’don’t shoot.’’
Next they took the wolf to the zoo. At the end of the story they lived happily ever after.
3 comments:
Hi Moses,
I liked reading your story about Peter and the Wolf. The way you used different words to link sentences towards the end of your story was good.
Karl's mum
Hi there - I was hoping to watch your film again as I thought it was great! I loved the movie as it had so many funky sounds and the story telling that went along with it kept me hooked right through to the end. I love the concept! I have no doubt that schools around our cluster will be trying out what you shared with us today. Malo lava Ning Nang Nong!
Hi Room 1
I really enjoyed watching your movie at the film festival. I loved the scene where the girls ring the bells down the slide. You are all very clever!
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