tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7942168985125982299.post7970381647340655878..comments2023-11-05T22:50:17.384+13:00Comments on Room 1 at Glenbrae School: Peter And The WolfGBSblogownerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02842716703098243180noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7942168985125982299.post-81718845854433611022010-09-18T18:11:45.926+12:002010-09-18T18:11:45.926+12:00Hi Karl
I really enjoyed reading your fantastic st...Hi Karl<br />I really enjoyed reading your fantastic story. You use descriptive language that makes your story interesting to read.<br />Keep writing your stories, you could be an author!<br />Love Uggie xxxUggienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7942168985125982299.post-38256050563593952572010-09-17T09:52:17.533+12:002010-09-17T09:52:17.533+12:00I loved the story-it was great, just what Nana nee...I loved the story-it was great, just what Nana needs when the ground is still shaking here in Christchurch.<br />See you in the school holidays,<br />Love NanaTrishanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7942168985125982299.post-75290354454220114972010-09-17T06:30:03.893+12:002010-09-17T06:30:03.893+12:00Hi Karl,
What a cool story! I can see that you ha...Hi Karl,<br />What a cool story! I can see that you have been influenced by Star Wars in your own writing. I like the way you named each character. I also like the way you used emotions in the story, for example when the dad was angry.<br />Your mumPlessius familynoreply@blogger.com